Spring 2018 calendar

Thanks for a great semester!

Issue story video

Good example of a local issue story told in a video: https://amherstcollective.org/all-too-human-a-look-inside-the-daily-reality-of-homelessness-131ee798dc5d

What's coming up

Example of Amherst Bulletin police log.

Class blogs:

https://thescoop100.wordpress.com
https://pyramidthatisinverted.wordpress.com (Libby's group)

extraontheordinary.wordpress.com
http://bloghardandblogoften.blogspot.com

https://voicesallaroundblog.wordpress.com

Schedule for the rest of the semester:

NOV 7  Issue pitch. BRIANNA, XENIA-QUIZ, EMILY,LIBBY-ARTICLE
• WRITE: 500-word Issue PRE-First Draft to peer edit next class.

NOV 9 Peer edit Issue pre-first drafts. KAITLIN-QUIZ, JONATHAN, JACK: ARTICLE
• Final FEATURE DUE (1,000 words, 15 percent of total grade)

NOV 14 FIRST DRAFT ISSUE (1,000 words with 4 voices, 2 of whom are "experts") due. PARKER-QUIZ, LAURIE, VICTORIA-ARTICLE
• Discuss Massachusetts Open Meeting Law.
• NEXT: Read Chapter 20 on Media Ethics

NOV 16  Possible In-class deadline assignment OPTIONAL DEADLINE ASSIGNMENT

NO CLASS NOV 21 and 23/ THANKSGIVING BREAK

NOV 28 FINAL ISSUE PAPER DUE. (1,000 words 20 percent of total grade)
• Review for FINAL QUIZ. ELLIOT-QUIZ, LYNDSEY, XENIA-ARTICLE

NOV 30 END OF SEMESTER QUIZ TYLER-QUIZ, COURTNEY, BRIANNA-ARTICLE
• Discuss summary/analysis writing.

DEC 5 In-class deadline assignment: Watch film and write ANALYSIS (10 percent of final grade) on deadline, due at end of class.
DEC 7 - Wrap-up, finish work on group blogs EMILY- QUIZ, NATALIE, LIBBY-ARTICLE

DEC 12  LAST DAY OF CLASS/ recap/ Final blogs presentations

ISSUE Rubric and tips:

The issue piece is similar to a feature but is intended to shed light on a serious topic.

• It should be written in standard news story form with a lead that makes a point and a nutgraph that answers the question of why this story is relevant to readers now and provides a "road map" to the rest of the story. 
• It should have a minimum of four voices, two of whom have experience with the issue and two of whom are experts who study the issue. 
• Photos are encouraged.
• It should be 1,000 words. Include a word count.

TIPS:

·       The issue paper is a serious, “data-driven” piece. It does not include the reporter’s opinion and it should not include any unreported generalizations. The sources in your paper describe their experiences with the issue while the experts analyze the issue, cite studies/data and potentially suggest solutions.

For instance, in a story slated to be published in advance of the new smoking ban going into effect in July 2013, the issue is that a ban goes into effect in July. It was enacted by the Faculty Senate and students were not given a vote. Some students are against the ban and question whether it is goes too far in the effort to regulate behavior. Others question how it will be enforced. Good sources are student and faculty both for and against the ban as well as faculty who voted for the ban. Health Services staff charged with implementing it are experts on the subject of what the plans are to enforce the ban. Professor of public health are experts on the health effects of smoking. They can also speak on public health policy –how other bans like this one have worked and what the challenges are. Students and faculty who are for or against the ban but don’t have any information about how it will be enforced or any expertise in public health may be good sources; they are NOT expert sources.

·       The lead does not consist of unreported generalizations. Don’t back your way into the lead, dive into it. Ask yourself what was the single most important thing you learned about the subject in the course of your reporting. That should be your lead.

*For example, in a paper about the changes to the football team’s status and the fact that they were playing in Gillette stadium in 2012 which made it harder for students to attend games, the lead should catch readers up on what is new in the ongoing saga that the new UMass president referred to in January as an annoying problem that he inherited. After the delivery in the lead of the very latest installment in the saga, the nutgraph should sum up briefly how UMass got to this point – the years-long debate about changing leagues and what the pros and cons of that would be; the decision to change leagues and take on all the logistics that would entail, whether some groups felt left out of the decision making process, how the change has played out so far. (Have there been more or fewer fans? More or less revenue? ) Nutgraph should end with an expert saying where he or she sees the football program going from here.

*In a paper about conflict between students and neighbors, the reporters talked to a neighbor who was frightened by the  late-night disturbance she experienced 10 years ago and the problem is that despite all kinds of different efforts to address the situation it is still an issue 10 years later! In the delayed lead, the neighbor describes the incident from 10 years ago and says little has changed. It is based on reporting --NOT the reporters’ generic description of the issue.The nutgraph will sum up past and current efforts to address the problem an end with an observation about an expert about, why the problem is so hard to solve and/or what the expert thinks it will take to solve the problem.

·       Put your strongest, most detailed/specific/concrete material high in the piece.

·       Keep the paragraphs short. When you introduce another speaker, start a new paragraph

·       Do not repeat anything. Each speaker should make a separate point. If four speakers all say, for instance, that they think the ZooMass reputation is an unexamined holdover from the 1970’s, don’t quote each of them saying this. You can say something like students and faculty interviewed agreed that the ZooMass reputation is a holdover from the 1970’s.

·       Keep judgment out of the piece. Students who smoke in their rooms even though the second-hand smoke may be harmful to others may be thoughtless, uncaring people – but the reporter does NOT make judgments. The reporter can quote other people saying this, however.

This week

Today, we'll watch a video (see below) and work on the blogs. Thursday, your feature first drafts are due for peer editing.

For a recent NEWS PROFILE example, click HERE.

Governmental bodies must post a notice to say there will be a meeting 48 hours in advance of it to give the public a chance to attend. A quorum (majority or the number of members present needed to vote) may not get together and discuss SUBSTANTIVE issues outside of the public's view. There are 10 exceptions under which a board may hold a closed-door session although it must later make the results of decisions reached available to the public. 
To review the Massachusetts Open Meeting Law: https://www.mass.gov/the-open-meeting-law

Links to Independent Media in a Time of War with Amy Goodman

This is a 2004 video, but the message is just as important today: the media has to remain independent and play a watchdog role with respect to the government. Instead of promoting powerful interests, reporters give voice to people whose stories provide perspective on the actions of those in power.

Part 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lcVDGefrbJc

Our understanding of world events is limited by what we observe ourselves or what is reported in the media. But we have to be aware of media bias. Even two divisions of the same media outlet, CNN and CNN International, report the news differently.
Is it appropriate to show "tasteless" photos of casualties of war? "War is tasteless," Amy Goodman says. But instead of the human consequences of war, we see images of war as if were a video game.
Goodman talks about the concept of journalists "embedded" with military forces. Journalism has to stay independent of the government it reports on.

Part 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2NZpM7E4v6A

We have to remain skeptical of media that promotes the agenda of those in power without analysis. News organizations shouldn't mindlessly adopt and promote the Pentagon's euphemistic titles  like "Operation Iraqi Freedom."
The "daily drumbeat" of who gets covered on the front pages of the established media helps solidify power in the hands of the few.  Media should provide (truly) diverse perspectives.

Part 3: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kl5Y1j-9XxU.

"Reporters' role is to go where the silence is to bring us the voices of people who are at ground zero," Goodman says. Reporters have to tell the stories of people who are not in a position to tell their own.
But much of the media is controlled by large corporations in whose interests it is to squash dissent. The media has to remain independent.

Deadline assignment today

Today is another groups deadline assignment, worth 5 percent of the total grade. You can see an example HERE.

• You can review the rubric at https://journ300.blogspot.com/p/assignments.html

• Chapter questions for next week's midterm can be found at https://journ300.blogspot.com/2017/10/fall-2007-study-questions-for-midterm.html

The final profile is due next Tuesday, OCT 24.Remember to INCLUDE A WORD COUNT AND PHOTO(S)

Updated schedule below:

OCT 19  In-class deadline assignment/(5 percent of total grade) 

OCT 24  FINAL DRAFT PROFILE DUE (1,000 words, INCLUDE WORD COUNT, 10 percent of total grade)  

• REVIEW FOR MID-TERM on readings, class presentations and common Ap Style points
• In-class work on features.

OCT 26

• MID-TERM
• Discuss potential Issue paper topics & interviews with 2-3 "experts." NEXT: Read Chapter 5 on Gathering and Verifying Information

OCT 31 

• Discuss mid-term answers
• Work on features and blogs 

NOV 2 Massachusetts Open Meeting Law 

• FIRST DRAFT FEATURE DUE (1,000) words. 
• Firm up issue story ideas. 
• NEXT: Write issue pitch to present next class. 
•  NEXT: Read Chapter 19 on Media Law

NOV 7  Issue pitch. 

• WRITE: 500-word Issue PRE-First Draft to peer edit next class. 

NOV 9 Peer edit Issue pre-first drafts. 

• Final FEATURE DUE (1,000 words, 15 percent of total grade)

NOV 14 FIRST DRAFT ISSUE (1,000 words with 4 voices, 2 of whom are "experts") due. 

• Discuss Massachusetts Open Meeting Law.
• NEXT: Read Chapter 20 on Media Ethics

NOV 16  Possible In-class deadline assignment

NO CLASS NOV 21 and 23/ THANKSGIVING BREAK

NOV 28 FINAL ISSUE PAPER DUE. (1,000 words 20 percent of total grade) 

• Review for FINAL QUIZ. 

NOV 30 END OF SEMESTER QUIZ

• Discuss summary/analysis writing. 

DEC 5 In-class deadline assignment: Watch film and write ANALYSIS (10 percent of final grade) on deadline, due at end of class.

DEC 7 - Wrap-up, finish work on group blogs

DEC 12  LAST DAY OF CLASS/ recap/ Final blogs presentations

Fall 2007 study questions for midterm

Worksheets

JOURN 300/FALL 2017

Chapters 3,4,8,9,10 and 14 worksheets with questions to review for midterm

CHAPTER  3 Interviewing

1. What is the most preferable interview and why - in-person, phone, email?

2. What is a primary source? Secondary source?

3. How should you prepare for an interview?

4. What should you learn about a subject before you interview him/her?

5. What is the aim of a profile, according to the text (42)?

6.What can you do to make it easier to ask an uncomfortable question?

7. Fill in the blank: The accurate of your story is only as good as your ______.

8. What are 3 useful questions to ask in an interview?

9. Should you stop asking questions at the end of an interview?

CHAPTER  4 Quotations and Attributions

1. Is every direct quote a good addition to your story? Explain.

2. Should you relate basic facts (where a person was born, for instance)  in direct quotes or paraphrase them?

3. Should you repeat information in quotes, using similar working that you have already included in the story and in the lead-in to the quote?

4. How do you judge whether something is quotable? (63)

5. Why does the text say that "Now and then even a commencement address can yield a great quote or two"? Wouldn't you EXPECT there to many great quotes in a commencement address?

6. What is a colloquialism? Can it be a good addition to a story?

7. Do you need to include words like "huh," "um," and "you know" in a direct quote?

8. Should you verify that everything that someone has said that you directly quote is accurate?

9. What is pre-publication review?

10. Should you ever alter words in a direct quote?

11. If you are quoting from an interview done by someone else, must you acknowledge this?

12. When is attribution NOT needed? (81)

13. Why do reporters and editors prefer the word "said" to other words like it?

14. What are some reasons you should never use anonymous sources?

15. What does off the record mean? Not for attribution? Background? Deep background?

CHAPTER 8 The Inverted Pyramid

1. What is meant by the term "inverted pyramid"?

2. Explain what the problem is with the following leads:

• "So, how hot was it yesterday?"

• "Amherst residents might be looking forward to warmer weather."

• "Amherst residents warmly greeted spring yesterday."

3. What are some reasons that quote leads are not recommended?

CHAPTER 9 Writing to be Read

1. Give an example of a concrete detail vs an abstraction. (175)

2. Give an example of "showing" vs. "telling."

3. Give an example of jargon.

4. Give an example of a cliche and how you could convey the same meaning using a non-cliche.

5. What is a simile? Give an example.

6. What is a metaphor? Give an example.

7. Give an example of jargon (186).

8. What was possibly wrong with describing Nancy Pelosi as a grandmother when she became the first female speaker of the United States House of Representatives? (187)

9. What is AP Style for "pro-choice" and "pro-life." Explain why.

10. Write a scene with dialogue in it.

11. Give an example of a question you might ask a source that would elicit an anecdote that you could use in your story.

CHAPTER 10 Alternatives to the Inverted Pyramid

1. Should all stories be organized according to chronological order? What kind of a story would be good to organize chronologically?

2. What's the difference between a hard news story and a news narrative or feature?

3. What is meant by the "focus structure"? (207)

4. Give some examples of "service journalism." (213)

CHAPTER 14 Speeches, News Conferences and Meetings

1. Explain how a speech is different from a news conference or a meeting.

2. How should you prepare before attending a speech that you will be reporting on?

3. How can you prepare for a meeting story?

4. If something unusual occurs at a speech event, it's best to just leave it out and focus on the theme of the speech. True or False

5. If the reporter is unsure of the main theme of a speech, what is one way to try to find out what it was?

6. Could an interesting story be written about a dull speech?

7) Is there any reason why you interview someone who wasn't at a meeting for a story about it?

8) Should you include direct quotations from a speech or meeting and, if so, who should you quote?

Aviva Luttrell class visit

Updated schedule for next few weeks and two stories about the same event

Click HERE for two approaches to a story about the same event.

NEXT FEW WEEKS SCHEDULE

OCT 10: NO CLASS/FOLLOW MONDAY SCHEDULE

OCT 12 ****update: visit from UMass All Star/Greenfield Recorder reporter Aviva Luttrell**** Read about the All Star event that begins at 6 in the Old Chapel at https://www.umass.edu/journalism/all-stars-alumni-panel

• FEATURE PITCH 
• If time, work on blogs. 
• NEXT: write 500-word feature PRE-first draft to peer edit next class. 

OCT 17  Peer edit PRE-first draft Feature stories. 

OCT 19  In-class deadline assignment/(5 percent of total grade) 

OCT 24  FINAL DRAFT PROFILE DUE (1,000 words, INCLUDE WORD COUNT, 10 percent of total grade)  

• REVIEW FOR MID-TERM
• In-class work on features.

OCT 26 

• MID-TERM
• Discuss potential Issue paper topics & interviews with 2-3 "experts." NEXT: Read Chapter 5 on Gathering and Verifying Information

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FEATURE TIPS:

Features

Describes a group of people, place, event, subculture, trend or just about anything you can think of. Should be visual, with concrete, specific language, anecdotes and examples and a lively mix of voices. 1,000 words

• Write your feature with the idea that you will try to get it published. Don’t include material that will appear “dated” or as if it’s “old news” a few weeks from now. If your feature is about an event that is coming up, mention the date and time of the event high in the story.

• Do NOT lead with a sweeping, unreported generalization; plunge right into the reported material

• Describe/SHOW vs. Tell

• The more reporting, the better. You can’t make up for a lack of reporting by trying to write cleverly. You need several voices, so that you’re not going back to the same source for more than a couple or so paragraphs. Every page should have a lively, dynamic mix of voices – not just one person!

• Eliminate wordiness! Do NOT repeat anything!!

• Paraphrase or rewrite rather than using parentheses/brackets. You should only need to use parentheses once or twice a year – NOT once or twice in a single paper. 

• Keep quotes short so that they have a greater impact. Paraphrase!!

• Don’t jam together, spliced by a comma, two complete and unrelated sentences. For instance, don’t say something like, “Wearing her black moccasins, Jane Doe is a graduate of UMass.” Avoid getting into traps like this by using SVO.

Examples:
Aviva – “Wires, computer chips and various other electronic parts cluttered the nearly empty UNOCCUPIED? rows of workstations in the basement laboratoryGOOD SPECIFIC LOCATION; ESTABLISHES THE PLACE WHERE THIS SCENE TRANSPIRED of Marcus Hall at UMass Amherst on a recent Thursday evening.GOOD – PLACES THE SCENE IN TIME Among the mishmash of components and equipment GOOD VISUALS; AS THOUGH THE STUDENTS ARE OUTSIZED BY THE EQUIPMENT sat four students, focused intently on the prototype in front of them.GOOD VISUAL With their April 8 deadline looming, GOOD PLACES THIS IN TIME; ESTABLISHES THAT THIS IS CURRENT, NEWSWORTHYthe group was making the final adjustments to their Senior Design Project – a football helmet fitted with a real-time concussion analyzer.” IF IT WERE A MOVIE, THE CAMERA WOULD NOW ZOOM IN ON THE OBJECT AT THE CENTER OF THE STORY

Jason: Max Nowak pauses in front of a door, DOOR IS SPECIFIC, CONCRETE, VISUALloud music and shrieking voices emitting from the room. He bangs on the door and says, “RA’s on duty!” The room plunges into silence as a nervous resident cracks open the door. CHEERFUL TONE Nowak reminds him of quiet hours and recommends that everyone calm down. It’s just a warning – for now. INTRO PLUNGES US INTO THE ACTION/SCENE

Deadline assignment rubric and example

Tomorrow, we will do the in-class, deadline assignment in groups. I've pasted a rubric for the assignment below, along with an example from last semester.

Thursday is when your 1,000-word first draft of the profile is due for peer editing. (Please include the word count.) If you want to email it to me sooner than that, I'll try to take a look at it.
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OCT 3: ****update**** In-class, deadline writing assignment: In your groups, interview 2-4 people EACH on campus on subject TBA; write 500 word story on-deadline with quotes from each of your sources and photos with cutlines. (5 percent of total grade)

OCT 5 -  FIRST DRAFT PROFILE DUE (1,000 words, INCLUDE WORD COUNT) Peer edit, work on blogs.

• NEXT: Read Chapter 10 on Alternatives to the Inverted Pyramid
• NEXT: Write Feature Pitch for next class. 

OCT 10: NO CLASS/FOLLOW MONDAY SCHEDULE

In your groups:

•  Interview at least two people EACH, IN PERSON Ask them an initial question on the topic you've selected. Develop a few follow-up questions and engage them in conversation for a few minutes, so you have a meaningful exchange.

 • Write down exact quotes, but be prepared to paraphrase most of their responses and just pick the best one or two sentences to directly quote. 

• Ask how to spell their names. (Double-check that you wrote it down correctly using UMass.edu Peoplefinder.) Ask them where they are from and what their majors are.

• Try to interview a diverse bunch of people – different majors, different hometowns, different nationalities, gender and race etc

• Ask if you can snap a photo. Use your people skills to encourage them to say yes, but don't be "pushy.".

• When the group re-convenes in the computer lab, talk about the responses everyone got. See if you can make some kind of assertion in your lead BASED ON YOUR REPORTING. 

That is, you will probably have some kind of guiding ideas about, for instance, if you were doing a story about what seniors are going to do when graduate whether seniors are likely to know what they are going to do after they graduate.

But DON’T write a lead based on speculation, and DON’T write a generic, non-reported lead like, for instance: As graduation approaches, college seniors face the daunting prospect of figuring out what to do with the rest of their lives. 

Instead, review all the responses you got and SYNTHESIZE some of the information. For instance, if you interview 10 people and 8 say they have a job, while 2 say they are going to decide what to do next and where to go the day after graduation, you could say something like: Some UMass seniors have already lined up jobs after graduation, which is a mere six weeks away, but a few are waiting until the day after the graduation festivities to decide their next move.

•  After the lead, include a nutgraph saying about how many people were interviewed and characterize the range of their responses. In the body of the paper, mention each of the people you interviewed in a paragraph dedicated to him or her.

 •  Include photos

Email me your pieces by the end of class. (It would be great to submit one or more to the Collegian or Amherst Wire!)

Example:

Have We Fallen Out of Love with Valentine’s Day?

Valentine’s Day may be known for candies, roses, and candlelit dinners spent with that special someone, but to a significant amount of UMass students, this past Tuesday was just another cold winter day filled with classes. 

It seems as though the feeling was more passive than passionate this year, especially to the students who spent the day single.

             “I don’t celebrate it because I don’t have anybody to love,” said Becca Demedeiros, a junior animal science major from Fairhaven, rather solemnly.

The general sentiment at UMass does not appear to be one of passion, but of apathy. While there were some who opted for a hopeful night out with friends, the vast majority instead went for the bare minimum, and either got small gifts if they were seeing someone, or simply did nothing at all. In the era of hook-ups and casual affairs, the love may be lost, and it seems as though UMass students have dumped Valentine’s Day.

Those who did not partake in the holiday opted for a far different kind of Valentine’s Day than expected. Some were surrounded by chocolates and flowers, while others, like S., opted for other special treats; the marijuana edibles she made with her friends.

S. spent the day with her closest friends getting high. She does not celebrate Valentine’s Day, and even considers herself to be “anti-Valentine.” 

“I won’t support a day for love when we should be celebrating love every single day, not just one day in February out of the entire year,” she said.

One of those friends getting high with her had a similar sentiment on the romantic holiday. “I spent the whole day high,” said M. M. considers herself “anti-Valentine “There’s just no point to be honest,” she said.

“I don’t see the point in spending a ton of money on commercial products and chocolates when we could be spending money on more important things to help society,” S said.

Other students see Valentine’s Day as a capitalist scheme as well.

The idea that big businesses and corporations flourish off the purchase of cards and flowers seems too shallow to some people, and often times is the source that turns them away from celebrating this day at all. 

Muntaha Elsir, who perhaps rather ironically was campaigning at a heart covered table, filled with free donuts, was blatant about her feelings toward the idea of Valentine’s Day. “I think it’s stupid. I don’t celebrate it because it is purely based off capitalism, not love,” she said.

Elsir (left) sits at a campaigning table in the Student Center

Valentine’s Day comes across as forced for some, and becomes a holiday where expectations are at an all time to high to spoil their significant other.

“In my past relationships it’s been kind of chill,” said Dianna Sorto, a UMass student. She also noted that she spent this past Tuesday in an exam. 

Sorto’s boyfriend, Anthony Tejada, a kinesiology major from Somerville sat across from her. “I just go along with it,” he said. “I just gave her some flowers and candy.” 

Tejada explains the passiveness of the Holiday. “I think it’s just expected that you have to get them a small gift. It is what it is,” Tejada said.

Donna Sorto (left) and Michael Tejada (right) sit for lunch at Blue Wall

As Valentine’s Day continues to be commercialized, many think the day has lost its luster. However, there are still those out there looking for a romantic rendezvous. Student Erica Luttazi, from Franklin, has not given up on the day just yet. 

“It is a bit overdone, but I still went out though.” Luttazi attended a Frat party on Feb. 14 Although this might not be the most ideal place to look for true romantic love, she still gave it the good old college try.

Notes from Kate Fagan's Sept. 21 talk at UMass

    Kate Fagan, signing copies of her book "What Made Maddy Run."

Some notes from Kate Fagan's talk:

Ask questions! When she was a beat reporter for the Philadelphia 76ers, they would have press conferences and she never asked asked questions.

Rather than show the video about Madison Holleran, which Fagan now has criticisms of,  she summed up the story it tells about Holleran a star athlete who took her own life. The headlines were along the lines of "Star Athlete Jumps to Death Over Grades," but Fagan feels there were other angles that were not fully explored, including the transition from high school to college and the conflict over quitting.

Fagan  said she wanted to convey three points, especially, during her talk: 1) The transition to college can be difficult  "It's like going to camp for the first time," she said. To a freshman, it can look like everybody else is doing much better than you are. At UPenn, where Holleran went to college, students speak of "Penn face," a kind of poker face that suggests to other people that "It's all coming easy." 

Looking at other people's carefully selected Instagram and Facebook photos can exacerbate this feeling that other people are doing much better. "I still feel left out when I look at Instagram," Fagan said.

2) Holleran's text messages did not provide much insight, because Holleran apparently deliberately tried to undercut any messages that she was struggling with emoji that seemed to say "re-interpret this message." Fagan had saved the text messages to last when she was looking at Holleran's computer, which Holleran's parents had allowed her to have access to for a weekend. But, "what struck" me, Fagan said, "was the lack of insight" she got from the messages. "The lack of insight was insightful."

3) We don't know how to talk about mental health in this country. The person who wakes up generally happy is lucky, but "In this country there's an attitude that some people struggle with mental health and some people are great." This isn't the case, Fagan said. Most people will probably have a mental health struggle sometime in his/her life. 

College can be more like climbing a tree than a ladder,  if you're not sure of the direction you want to go. This can be confusing, and if a student has an issue with anxiety or depression, as Holleran did, it can trigger a struggle.  "It's been pretty eye-opening how lucky I am that when I first wake up I'm pretty happy," Fagan said. 

Other points:

Quitting: Holleran was talked out of quitting the track team, and at the heart of her letter about wanting to quit, "was clearly the idea that she would would be a failure" if she did. Fagan said.

Fagan had wanted to quit playing basketball when she was in college but was similarly talked out of it. What ultimately helped Fagan, she said, was to tell her coach that she did not like the style of coaching that made Fagan the focus of criticisms aimed at the team, in general. Fagan explained to the coach that she responded best to praise and liked to be the "unsung hero."

Perfectionism: Fagan cited a quote "Notice how close perfection ia to despair." "That resonates with me," Fagan said. 

The hardest part about writing the book: "I never met Madison Holleran and and trying to feel authoritative about someone you built as a hologram -- I don't know if I'm right." How can Fagan ever really know what went on in Holleran's mind? While writing the book, Fagan had a recurring dream that she would see Holleran at a coffee shop, but when Fagan tried to approach her, she would disappear out a back door. 

There are rules about writing about suicide and once Fagan found out what they were she didn't like them. (There's a chapter in her book about them.) 

Now, Fagan wishes she had written more about the tension when talking about suicide between A) speaking of it as thought it is either predetermined that a person who wants to commit suicide will, and B) finding that someone is to blame or that "someone missed something."

Fagan writes about some of the same themes in he this piece on ESPN.com at http://www.espn.com/espnw/voices/article/19859160/honoring-life-penn-student-athlete-madison-holleran-continuing-talk-maddy

Interviews Fall 2017

Interviewing tips: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rmHjXA8QtfY
Mini-profile example: https://journ300.blogspot.com/2017/02/mini-profile-example.html
Blog post about Kate Fagan 2015 visit to UMass: https://journ300.blogspot.com/2015/10/espns-kate-fagan-at-umass.html

Parker's group:

https://youtu.be/F1kexgKWfWk 

https://youtu.be/BwLeVO8SRLY 

https://youtu.be/gTqYIZKxD0A

Kaitlin and Lyndsey:  https://youtu.be/f3mJ5g5qg1o

Tyler and Kaitlyn: https://youtu.be/iPN1DlO2gM8

Lyndsey and Tyler: https://youtu.be/VC7atQdJLsY


Brianna/Xenia
https://youtu.be/fVh2Hclp2JEXenia/Jonathan
https://youtu.be/AvBQ4x9J0jEJonathan/Brianna
https://youtu.be/pCZ-VNL8CzM
Prof Carey/Jack
https://youtu.be/ouNfIzzgGOEJack/Prof Carey
https://youtu.be/h6cgmr6xr7U

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FqUcQB_5IY8 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oGNM6Oa6WDI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SXiQ9tmXryU

https://youtu.be/CT7QQyXxY5A

https://youtu.be/2UHC4LWKNqA

https://youtu.be/MELeLWsKKHQ

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What's coming up:

SEPT 14  - Analyze interviewing videos, discuss elements of a good mini-profile NEXT:Write a mini-profile of a classmate based on interview and follow-up questions. Include a photo that adds value to your story, for example more information, details or illustration. SEE MINI-PROFILE TIPS BELOW

NEXT: Read Chapter 4 on Quotations and Attributions

SEPT 19: Continue to analyze  interviewing videos, if not finished.  Discuss chapters, how to write a speech story. If time, start blogs.

• TURN IN HARD COPY OF FIRST ASSIGNMENT: 400-500 word written piece with photo based on your interview of a classmate. (5 percent of final grade) 
• NEXT: READ: Chapter 14 on Speeches, News Conferences and Meetings
• NEXT: Write a brief profile pitch to present in class Thursday Sept. 26. Tell us who you plan to write about, what the angle likely will be, who else you can interview about your subject. It should be about a local person and NOT a family member or friend.)

SEPT 21 ******update: ATTEND Kate Fagan event************ 4-6 p.m., Massachusetts Room, Mullins Center

SEPT 26 SPEECH PAPER on Kate Fagan event DUE (10 percent of grade) See Speech Paper Essentials below

• Present PROFILE PITCH
• NEXT:  Bring in to peer edit next class a 500-word, written “pre-first draft” profile with lead, nutgraph and quote(s). 
• Discuss feature stories. 

SEPT 28   *****update: 

• PEER EDIT hard copies of profile  pre-first drafts.
• NEXT: Read Chap. 9 on Writing to be Read

( POSTPONED until OCT 5: In-class, deadline writing assignment: In your groups, interview 2-4 people EACH on campus on subject TBA; write 500 word story on-deadline with quotes from each of your sources. (5 percent of total grade)

OCT 5 -  FIRST DRAFT PROFILE DUE (1,000 words, INCLUDE WORD COUNT) 

In-class, deadline writing assignment: In pairs, interview 4 people on campus on subject TBA; write 500 word story on-deadline with quotes from each of your sources. (5 percent of total grade)

• NEXT: Read Chapter 10 on Alternatives to the Inverted Pyramid
• NEXT: Write Feature Pitch for next class. 

OCT 10: NO CLASS/FOLLOW MONDAY SCHEDULE

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Mini-profile assignment (500 words with photo(s))

• The lead should make a POINT about your subject. (She LOVES fashion/ Being an EMT wasn't always rewarding/ She was always nervous about traveling but realized it was just as life-changing as people told her it would be when she went to Paris.) 
• Nutgraph should sum up the points you'll make in the piece. (He had enough negative experiences to learn what the apparently inevitable drawbacks of the job are, but the positive experiences were unforgettable.) 
• Step back high in the story and give us some facts about your subject. Where he or she is from, some family details, how or why he/she came to UMass. Then "unpack" the points you made in the nutgraph by explaining in greater details, using examples and quote from your subject. Pay attention to your topic sentences/transitions. 
• Don't forget to include a photo(s)!

Some profile tips:

The reader wants to know what makes your subject unique or interesting.  SHOW vs TELL us that he or she is unique.

For instance, the UMass "omelet lady," who students have written about, is unique, because she 1) interacts with the students so closely, 2) keeps up a steady stream of banter, which not all DC employees do and 3) conveys a strong sense of pride in her job. 

· Provide examples that illustrate/SHOW the qualities you think make your subject interesting. 

So, for example, SHOW the omelet lady talking to a particular student at a particular time about a particular subject. Don’t just sum up what she USUALLY talks about, or if you do ALSO add a PARTICULAR example. How do you show she is proud of her job? Ask her why she is. Mention that she has a Facebook page. (It turns out her husband started the FB page; interview him! Ask him if she has always been so invested in all of her jobs. Have them met a lot of people through her job? What does she say about it to him? Has she told him of any particularly memorable things that happened on the job? )

· Once you’ve established that this person is unique or otherwise interesting, ask questions about his or her background to discover things that LED to him/her being the interesting person he/she is. 

For instance, a basketball player SC is shown in his room amid a LOT of clothes, but it is apparent he keeps all his clothes well organized and that he takes care of them. *Ask him WHY he thinks he is neat? *Were his parents neat? *What did they do? *What kind of a house did he grow up in? *Does he value orderliness? If so, does he think it is because the value of it was ingrained in his childhood? Or is he neat because his childhood was kind of chaotic, for instance? *Ask him who has been a big influence in his life and why? *Can he remember any particular instances of this person helping or guiding him or any particular advice this person offered him? You don’t have to go on at great length about his in the piece. Just a couple of sentences would help us “picture” the subject and where he came from.

· Paint a multi-dimensional picture of your subject that goes beyond the main thing you’re concentrating on in the piece/the "angle."

You can do this by asking "evergreen questions." For instance, AM is a lacrosse coach at UMass where she once was a player. She is well-respected by her players for her strong work ethic. Ask what else she does besides lacrosse? Does she bring this strong work ethic to everything she does, would she say? (Maybe she’ll say she’s got a dog, but she’s totally undisciplined when it comes to training her dog and she lets the dog run all over the house and knock things over, for instance.) Where does she think she got this strong work ethic she brings to coaching lacrosse? When did she first start playing lacrosse? Was it her first choice of a sport to play? Did someone encourage her? How? 
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SPEECH PAPER ESSENTIALS (750 words)

1) The lead should get to the heart of the event -- NOT just say it occurred.

2) Include in the first few sentences of the story A)what the occasion was, B)who sponsored it, C) where it was held and –D) how many attended. Include the title if there is one. It’s not necessarily to cram in every detail, such as what time it was held.

3) Nutgraph: This takes the reader beyond the lead and sums up in a few sentences the major points the speaker made or the basic gist of his/her argument/case/presentation. It’s a roadmap to the rest of the story. Can be combined with the paragraph that includes the title, name of occasion etc.

4) Body of story: Take the reader through the points that the speaker made in support of his or her case/main point/argument/presentation. Each paragraph should have a strong topic sentence. Provide specific examples and direct quotes.

5) Interview 3-4 people who attended for their reaction/thoughts. Don’t forget to include this at the end of your paper!