JOURN 300/SPRING 2015 Tips
LEADS
Ø Do NOT lead with a sweeping,
unreported generalization; plunge right into the reported material
Ø Lead should do more than just say the event
occurred; should be direct and reader friendly; Should be engaging!
JUST THE FACTS
Ø
Closely
observed, specific, concrete DETAILS will make or break your story.
Ø
Journalism is the reporting of the visible and verifiable. Reporters
describe what they can observe and what identified sources tell them. Reporters
don't speculate or presume to know about their subjects' mental states and do
not relay information that they have not verified and substantiated with
objective facts.
Ø
Keep your
opinions/judgments out of the story. Don’t editorialize or make grand claims
Ø
Don’t pile on the adjectives and adverbs and reporter’s
editorializing. For instance, instead of saying she is an extremely likable
person , say, Her friends describe her as an “extremely likeable” person.
(If they do.)
Ø
In general,
keep the reporter and the mechanics of
the interview out of the story. Get to the story!
WRITING
Ø
Put your best, most vivid, reported material up top. Put
details anyone could get off your subject’s resume low in the story
Ø
Double- and
triple-check name spellings!
Ø
Use “said”
vs other words like it
Ø
AP style is
to NOT capitalize academic subjects & do not capitalize job titles unless the title comes RIGHT before
the job holder’s name
Ø
In general,
write in past tense
Ø News stories do NOT have essay-style
conclusions
Ø Don’t
write “When asked a question about this
or that.” Just tell us what your source said. If need be you could say “As for
this or that…”
Ø Don’t
alter direct quotations AT ALL. But if a person says gonna or shoulda, write going to and should
have…
Ø
Write
with the idea that you will try to get it published. Don’t include material
that will appear “dated” or as if it’s “old news” a few weeks from now.
If your feature, for instance, is about an event that is coming up,
mention the date and time of the event high in the story.
Ø Describe/SHOW vs. Tell
Ø The more reporting, the better.
You can’t make up for a lack of reporting by trying to write cleverly. For most
stories, you will need several voices, so that you’re not going back to the
same source for more than a couple or so paragraphs. Every page should have a
lively, dynamic mix of voices – not just one person!
Ø Eliminate wordiness! Do NOT
repeat anything!!
Ø Paraphrase or rewrite rather
than using parentheses/brackets. You should only need to use parentheses once
or twice a year – NOT once or twice in a single paper.
Ø Keep quotes short so that they
have a greater impact. Paraphrase!!
Ø Don’t jam together, spliced by
a comma, two complete and unrelated sentences. For instance, don’t say
something like, “Wearing her black moccasins, Jane Doe is a graduate of
UMass.” Avoid getting into traps like this by using SVO.
Ø Commas and periods INSIDE
quotation marks
Ø Put TV shows, book titles,
article titles, movie titles in quotation marks
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